Hi Hannet! The metaphor is well done and relates to the topic. Yet, please consider the use capital letter in the word "Queen"; please take a look at the verb "teachs" check it once again! :-) Please always love your mother...and don’t forget to say thank you to your mother! -thanks-
I'm agree with you hannet she is full colouring our life. But if she away from me i think i am missing ,the blue one,the red one, the green one. They cannot complete colouring my life
So use that colors to make her proud :)
BalasHapusHi Hannet!
BalasHapusThe metaphor is well done and relates to the topic.
Yet, please consider the use capital letter in the word "Queen"; please take a look at the verb "teachs" check it once again! :-)
Please always love your mother...and don’t forget to say thank you to your mother!
-thanks-
Achon; thanks for your advice given for Hannet! :-)
BalasHapusAlways remember her in your heart.Good work by the way.Nicely done.
BalasHapusI'm agree with you hannet she is full colouring our life. But if she away from me i think i am missing ,the blue one,the red one, the green one. They cannot complete colouring my life
BalasHapusthank you so much.. :)
BalasHapusgood poem always love your mother
BalasHapusso always obey your queen and follow the rules that she made it for your best ;) nice poem
BalasHapus